Sorry it has been quiet . . . I've been sick and also been moving house. Everytime I move, I swear it's the last time, and every time I lie.
I did make some progress in the story arena, and I am pleased that this chapter turned out to be funnier than I'd planned while still moving the action along.
Here's a short teaser:
St. Petersburg, Bella’s POV
Rage made my vision swim and I hugged the chimneystack tighter. Get a hold of yourself, I thought. So you’ve been shot. You’ve been shot before. What’s a few darts instead of bullets? My body responded with another bout of the heaves. Okay, I thought, maybe I need to lay down for a while and recover instead of running around on rooftops in the warm evening sun.
Just as soon as I figured out where to go to ground. Letting go of the chimneystack, I started unsteadily for the next house. Counting detours to make sure there was no Laurent behind me, I was what . . . three miles from a safe place? Four?
Unless Laurent was waiting for me up ahead. The thought brought me up short, which was a bad thing, because I’d already jumped for the next rooftop.
Oh, this just makes my day, I thought. I grabbed for the ledge and missed, stripped a power cord, thumped a balcony, and landed stonily on my feet.
Right in front of a ghost.
“Holy shit!” he exclaimed, stepping back.
“Ben Cheney.” I replied, straightening up. Or trying to. My head spun, my vision swam, and the sidewalk zoomed up to meet me.
Read the rest at: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5382391/6/
Wednesday, December 16, 2009
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I like your blog..found it on twitarded. Mine is www.sotwired.blogspot.com My Sis and I just started it, so it's nothing exciting..just twi obsession/adventure stuff.
ReplyDeleteGlad you found me! Looking forward to a fun twi-community experience in 2010, even though I've been bloggy breaking lately. Checked yours out and you're off to a great start . . I scoffed at the vampires, too, and now I am pwned by them!
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